Very well done! I'm surprised it only took you 5 1/2 hours. Sounds are great and you have good build-ups and melodies.
Very well done! I'm surprised it only took you 5 1/2 hours. Sounds are great and you have good build-ups and melodies.
I think the intro was way too long. I was about to quit listening until the rest of the instruments started. Starting at 1:00, one of the instruments (it might be percussion or strings) was playing eight notes or something in the bass and it started to get quite unnerving, and I felt very relieved at 1:22. I think you may have side chained something too much, or you should get rid of whichever instrument is playing repetitively in the background. I hope you understand what I am trying to say, I think it would make the song a lot easier to listen to. You have great melodies and layering, but the percussion and bass is hogging too much attention.
Thanks for the review! I could always make the intro shorter and give more balance to it!
Some constructive criticism:
First of all, I think you could use some better samples. The melody piano sounds seemed too loud and surprising. Also, some notes in the melody seemed a bit off-key, but that may be what you have been going for. I'm not sure if I'd call it sad or tragic, it sounds more dramatic to me.
I think you did a good job by layering the two tracks together - good harmony.
I appreciate the feedback.Thanks!
Great inflections with the piano. I like the change of percussion, and the whole song has a great vibe. It loops well. Can't wait to hear the full thing. Keep it up!
Great sounds and melodies! The transitions and buildups are perfect. I did get slightly bored at 2:04 to 3:35, I think you could've shortened that part. Great vibe, I really enjoyed listening to this. :)
Great vibe, but the cymbal started annoying me. Good melodies.
Cool, good to know. Thanks for the review.
I've been messing around with music on and off for a while. My main influences are video game music, rock, electronica, and german death metal. I'm no longer doing commissions, but if you'd like to use one of my songs for something, I'd be glad to talk!
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